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Red Revenge (The Red Eye Innovation)

June 27th, 2017 · No Comments · English

Outside, the wind howled: it was zig-zagging across the hills. Inside, the cave was still – so still you couldn’t hear yourself breathe. My heart scowled at me forcing all of my body to feel pain and anger. I didn’t deserve to look like this – blood-shot red eyes, silver teeth and a wooden leg. He should’ve been gone. He should’ve died.

Suddenly, there was a tap.

Then there was another and another. I familiar face grew from the darkness.

Then it came to me.

It was Sally the daughter of my enemy Dave.

It started when I was normal – the best actually. I was running away from the pain of loss: I didn’t know what happened next but the next thing I knew, I was on a table with someone holding a red eye. I looked horrific, terrible, ugly!

Sally’s father was the one who caused this: my stomach churned, the smell of fresh flesh wafted in the air and the sweet sight of screams invaded my head. That feeling was called revenge. My red eye Bulged – it was time to go to my happy place…

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